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 Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.

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PostSubject: Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.   Blue Moon; Time to face the facts. I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 30, 2011 1:51 pm

Chapter 1: The Exposed.

I stared at the people all around me as I walked to school. One man walked past and bumped into me, causing me to drop my books.He bent down to help me and I gazed at his neck longingly, it was so exposed, so inviting, almost like he was welcoming me to drink from him.I looked away quickly. I can do it myself I said as I still remained looking the other way. I grumbled softly, grabbed my books and ran away, I couldn't stand it, going to school was agony, seeing all the exposed necks made me thirsty for their blood, but I knew I had to wait until night fall to drink. I quickly went through the school gates and a guy looked at me and wolf whistled, I put my middle finger up at him and continued walking. I grimaced in pain as my fangs grew, No, not now! I thought. I was transforming and I quickly ran into the bathroom, a girl was standing at the sink. I ran over and bared my fangs and sunk them deep into her neck, she screamed in agony and then fell limp, I dropped her head on the counter and licked my lips, satisfied. I glanced around my eyes red and curious. I burst into the hall and looked for my next victim.

My Vampire story, I won't get to graphical.

What do you guys think?
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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.   Blue Moon; Time to face the facts. I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 30, 2011 2:17 pm

It's very good :3 Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.   Blue Moon; Time to face the facts. I_icon_minitimeFri Jul 01, 2011 9:34 am

Very Happy that was good
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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.   Blue Moon; Time to face the facts. I_icon_minitimeFri Jul 01, 2011 12:26 pm

Very nice. x3 At least its not like Twilight. I hate that series. (No offense to anyone on here who might be a fan.)
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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.   Blue Moon; Time to face the facts. I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 02, 2011 2:33 pm

Thanks guys, and Twilight sucks ( I don't mean to offend any Twilight fans)

Continuing Chapter 1

I smirked softly and walked around, My nose twitched and my head jerked to side, I saw a boy grimacing in pain as he placed a plaster over a fresh wound, I smiled softly and led the boy away. He began to scream in pain as I tightened my grip on his risk, allowing my sharp nails to sink into his skin and causing blood to seep over them, I pushed him into a bush and I ripped off his plaster with my teeth and began to drink, I stumbled to my feet and wiped the blood from my mouth with the back of my hand, and then I ran, deep into the dark shadows of an old wood...
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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.   Blue Moon; Time to face the facts. I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 02, 2011 2:38 pm

Gugh, Twilight disgusts me. It's a disgrace to vampires. They aren't supposed to be hot and sparkily, they're supposed to be ugly and scary looking >:J

That part was creepy but cool Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.   Blue Moon; Time to face the facts. I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 02, 2011 2:39 pm

I know, I'm kinda obsessed with Vampires though, haha.

Thanks Yosh:3
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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.   Blue Moon; Time to face the facts. I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 02, 2011 2:47 pm

X3

You're welcome Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Blue Moon; Time to face the facts.   Blue Moon; Time to face the facts. I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 02, 2011 6:47 pm

YoshKatgirl wrote:
Gugh, Twilight disgusts me. It's a disgrace to vampires. They aren't supposed to be hot and sparkily, they're supposed to be ugly and scary looking >:J

Thank you!

And looking good Tosca. x3
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