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Night
Posts : 2853 Join date : 2010-06-07 Age : 36 Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| Subject: RotCM: TSoC Fri Aug 09, 2013 2:34 am | |
| A comic I made long ago but made some minor changes, mainly the eyes and ears. Anyhow, this is a story about a young female named Chelsea, whom escapes her cruel mob after being sentenced to death. This is how she struggles, manages to find a mate, form a mob and desiring to defeat the evil and sadistic Madame, the one who took everything away. Will Chelsea succeed? All characters and story belong to me~ More parts to come. Btw, RotCM: TSoC is short for Rise of the Cherish Mob: The Story of Chelsea~
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YoshKatgirl
Posts : 12426 Join date : 2010-02-18 Age : 35 Location : Yoshi's Island :D
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Fri Aug 09, 2013 2:38 pm | |
| The plot to the comic sounds exciting, but for some reason the picture is absent from the post. D= | |
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Night
Posts : 2853 Join date : 2010-06-07 Age : 36 Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Fri Aug 09, 2013 9:43 pm | |
| - YoshKatgirl wrote:
- The plot to the comic sounds exciting, but for some reason the picture is absent from the post. D=
It is? Odd, it shows up fine with me. | |
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YoshKatgirl
Posts : 12426 Join date : 2010-02-18 Age : 35 Location : Yoshi's Island :D
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Fri Aug 09, 2013 9:47 pm | |
| Oh, never mind. Now I see it. Must've been my dad's computer not loading it properly. His computer can be slow at times. )X | |
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Night
Posts : 2853 Join date : 2010-06-07 Age : 36 Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Fri Aug 09, 2013 9:51 pm | |
| - YoshKatgirl wrote:
- Oh, never mind. Now I see it. Must've been my dad's computer not loading it properly. His computer can be slow at times. )X
No, it was from me, I turned something off on dA and it must of made it so the comic couldn't be seen. So I turned it back on and now it works. Had a feeling I messed up somehow. XD But glad you can see it now~ | |
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YoshKatgirl
Posts : 12426 Join date : 2010-02-18 Age : 35 Location : Yoshi's Island :D
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Fri Aug 09, 2013 9:55 pm | |
| Oh, that explains it, lol. It's okay. And yaaay! 8D It looks great. ^^ | |
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Night
Posts : 2853 Join date : 2010-06-07 Age : 36 Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Fri Aug 09, 2013 9:58 pm | |
| - YoshKatgirl wrote:
- Oh, that explains it, lol. It's okay. And yaaay! 8D It looks great. ^^
Thanks. X3 I'm gonna have to get back to working on the next part. XD | |
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Pancake
Posts : 6265 Join date : 2009-06-04 Age : 30 Location : Treasure Town!
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Fri Aug 09, 2013 10:05 pm | |
| If you don't mind me saying, there are some parts where the eyes could have been a little smaller, but it looks great (don't change it, just keep that in mind!)
I need to work on my comics. lD I might cancel my meerkat one though. | |
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Night
Posts : 2853 Join date : 2010-06-07 Age : 36 Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Fri Aug 09, 2013 10:09 pm | |
| - Pancake wrote:
- If you don't mind me saying, there are some parts where the eyes could have been a little smaller, but it looks great (don't change it, just keep that in mind!)
I need to work on my comics. lD I might cancel my meerkat one though. Ehhh, I'm always bad with eyes, I'm aware some parts, they are bigger than I wanted. ^^; I might go back and change them around a little.. I was working on the changes for days and just wanted to get it done and over with, so yeah, no doubt I made a few errors here and there. XD I love your comics. ^^ But your meerkat one, the Linklu one you mean? | |
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little_maybelline
Posts : 2106 Join date : 2009-05-27 Location : Stuck in the World of Warcraft
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Sat Aug 10, 2013 1:43 am | |
| It looks great Night | |
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Night
Posts : 2853 Join date : 2010-06-07 Age : 36 Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Sat Aug 10, 2013 2:13 am | |
| - little_maybelline wrote:
- It looks great Night
Thanks LM. ^^ | |
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Pancake
Posts : 6265 Join date : 2009-06-04 Age : 30 Location : Treasure Town!
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Sat Aug 10, 2013 7:33 pm | |
| I feel Arising Assassin is inadequate and the idea was stupid. I was looking forward to it but... Well... | |
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Night
Posts : 2853 Join date : 2010-06-07 Age : 36 Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| Subject: Re: RotCM: TSoC Sat Aug 10, 2013 8:30 pm | |
| I see. It happens to all of us, I've had that myself time to time.
*Notices something.* Oh, you're using SV for the Savages. Uhhhh..... Ooops. XD Better change mine to SU for the Survivor Mob.. ^^; | |
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