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Night
Posts : 2853
Join date : 2010-06-07
Age : 36
Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
 |  Subject: Whiskers - Subordinate Male  Thu Jun 04, 2015 4:22 pm | |
| "Life throws a lot at you... All you can do is try to be ready."
Name
Whiskers
Age
2 years, 1.5 months
Gender
Male
Rank
Subordinate Male
Family (If any)
Father: Unknown rover (Whereabouts & status unknown)
Mother: Unknown subordinate female (Whereabouts & status unknown)
Brother: Butters (Fiddle Nip Mob)
Brother: Skippers (Whereabouts & status unknown)
Description
Whiskers is skinnier than most 'kats due to an unknown birth defect
His coat color is darker than his lighter brother Butters, a trait shared with his mother, along with his colored paws
One of his ears has a small notch on it, from when he and Skippers rough played a little too roughly as pups.
His tail tip is a little crooked
His brown-ish eyes are from his father's side of the family as a recessive gene
Strengths
Loyal
Devotion
Alertness
Protective
Compassionate
Weaknesses
Tends to be stubborn
Doesn't like getting special treatment due to his disorder
Can be distant at times, despite desiring friends
Personality
Whiskers tends to be a hard 'kat to read. At times he seems friendly and compassionate, but other times, he's aloof and a bit distant. Its mainly due to his own paranoia and anxiety about his skinny appearance. He hates being judged and being given special treatment due to his condition, he wants to be treated like everyone else. However, to those he's closest with, he's loyal and true, staying by their side no matter what.
History Whiskers was born to a subordinate female, with his father being a rover. He has two brothers, Butters and Skippers. Out of the three, Whiskers was the independent one. He usually didn't call on others or anything. However, he was born more skinny than most, for reasons unknown. His brother, Butters, often worried for him and began to linger around. Although it annoyed Whiskers at first, he grew to enjoy Butter's company and thus their relationship grew strong. Skipper, however, kept his distance and so, Whiskers never got to really bond with his other brother. A rival mob eventually attacked, separating Butters and Whiskers during the confusion. Whiskers tried to locate his missing brother but was soon caught by rival males and was chased away before he could locate his brother. Whiskers took to joining a few mobs during his travels, but only stayed with them temporarily to regain lost strength before continuing onward. But he eventually began to realize being a loner was hard, especially with his condition. He therefore decided the next mob he'll encounter will be his permanent home. While he misses Butters and often wonders about him, Whiskers believes one day, he'll be reunited with his littermate. Appearance
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Meyerm
Posts : 4431
Join date : 2010-03-17
Age : 28
Location : Everywhere yet nowhere at once
| | Subject: Re: Whiskers - Subordinate Male Thu Jun 04, 2015 4:26 pm | |
| I like him. Say, would you be interested at all in a romance plot? I'm looking to pair Zofia with someone for a secretive subordinate romance. She's younger, but not too much. | |
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Night
Posts : 2853
Join date : 2010-06-07
Age : 36
Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| | Subject: Re: Whiskers - Subordinate Male Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:09 pm | |
| - Meyerm wrote:
- I like him. Say, would you be interested at all in a romance plot? I'm looking to pair Zofia with someone for a secretive subordinate romance. She's younger, but not too much.
Thanks. ^^ And secretive eh? Sure, I'd be willing. ^^ Could help with Whisker's confidence a bit too. | |
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StormyMeerkat
Posts : 6340
Join date : 2010-01-05
Age : 25
Location : Tornado Alley
| | Subject: Re: Whiskers - Subordinate Male Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:21 pm | |
| Him and Butter's designs are very nice :3
He's really different from his brother though, and can't wait to see them in action! | |
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Night
Posts : 2853
Join date : 2010-06-07
Age : 36
Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| | Subject: Re: Whiskers - Subordinate Male Thu Jun 04, 2015 5:30 pm | |
| - StormyMeerkat wrote:
- Him and Butter's designs are very nice :3
He's really different from his brother though, and can't wait to see them in action! Yes, I love their designs too. Tried to make them similar but also have their differences as well. ^^ Yup, as most siblings are. X3 And same here. ^^ | |
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Pancake
Posts : 6265
Join date : 2009-06-04
Age : 30
Location : Treasure Town!
| | Subject: Re: Whiskers - Subordinate Male Sat Jun 20, 2015 12:54 am | |
| I may just be a little nitpicky, but is his disorder based on something that exists? It's doubtful that a meerkat could survive like that, especially if his ribs are so obvious... no animal could survive on that. Maybe you could just say that he's skinnier than normal instead?
Also again, a paragraph in the description would be appreciated. | |
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Night
Posts : 2853
Join date : 2010-06-07
Age : 36
Location : I don't know, I'm lost! D8
| | Subject: Re: Whiskers - Subordinate Male Sat Jun 20, 2015 8:00 pm | |
| - Pancake wrote:
- I may just be a little nitpicky, but is his disorder based on something that exists? It's doubtful that a meerkat could survive like that, especially if his ribs are so obvious... no animal could survive on that. Maybe you could just say that he's skinnier than normal instead?
Also again, a paragraph in the description would be appreciated. Yes, it is based on a real disorder, but I've changed it to him being skinnier due to a birth defect instead. So, yeah, updated. XD | |
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Pancake
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Location : Treasure Town!
| | Subject: Re: Whiskers - Subordinate Male Sat Jun 20, 2015 9:07 pm | |
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little_maybelline
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| | Subject: Re: Whiskers - Subordinate Male Sun Jun 21, 2015 12:10 am | |
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